I've redone this frame, see here, making it more balanced. It retains some of the previous iteration, whlie being less overt. It is a more subtle presentation. Hah! The overall tone of the frame might be a little darker, as well, though this is a more accurate photo than the previous.

The inspiration for this redo was another frame, posted about under Process, that I was starting to over think. Somewhat stymied, I decided to hack away some of this frame; a jolt to get me moving. I'm now happier with both frames, as I stopped fretting and actually moved forward, though fretting seems an essential part of the process sometimes.